Matt Bellamy

Oh wow, this is awesome. I love how you've done the smoke and how delicate and wispy it looks. I don't really have any criticisms, I just wish I could ...

These are really good! I love your use of colour in the first one, but the person doesn't seem to have any knees! Poor thing looks a bit like my ...

I like this. I like how you compared the cycle of falling in and out of love to being reborn. It's a very simple poem, and you didn't need to ...

I really like this! Especially the second stanza, and what the sister says and how she looks while she's doing it. One thing I would say is that when you ...

Hey! You use description really well in this piece, I can imagine really clearly what you're talking about. I'm not sure why her freedom would mean your destruction, so I ...

I really like this. I like how you started in the present and then went back in time. Your rhyming is a bit simple in places but it doesn't sound ...

Wow. I love your writing style. You say things in such a unique way that I wouldn't expect. I really don't have anything to critique, your description is so beautiful ...

If you do another 50, you'll get the star :p Not sure I'll manage that but I'm tempted to try!

I don't plot. I might have a vague idea of what I want to happen in my head and as I write I think of things I want to happen ...

I aimed for 500 reviews (I was at 476) and I reached it, but I thought I was going to be getting another blue star! Now I'm disappointed. :( But ...

Haha, I like this. It really does lighten the mood and it's very cute and catchy. It does sound a little bit repetitive but that's just the style of the ...

Hi! This is good. I like how you compare the girl to plastic flowers, and the concept of not being really alive or dead. You use description really well in ...

Hey! This could be a great poem but it needs a bit of tweaking. I think the main problem is that some of it is worded awkwardly. It seems like ...

This is a sweet poem, very cute. However, you need to work on your grammar. Capitalise your I's, and there are places where you said then instead of than, quiet ...

Hey! I really like this, and mainly because I didn't expect the twist that you had killed your mother. I like the rhyming because it makes the poem sound cheerful, ...